"can she breathe?" - Ming Lauren Holden
I first tried "Breathe" for this one, but it was a no-go. I also thought about "False God" because of the ocean reference, but again, probably not the fit.
I've listened to and read through "Carolina" and am settling on it, I think. The mentions of sea throughout the poem and the song seem to parallel well. I think this is what sold me:
Poem: "nothing / is relentless / but the sea."
Song: "It's between me, the sand, and the sea / Carolina knows"
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